Goldheart-F-StarClan

[kitsune13]

Goldheart Female Died at 37 moons, looks 30 moons Heterosexual StarClan Deceased "You never know what good another can bring." Genotype (optional) Appearance Goldheart is a tall, orange she-cat with bright blue eyes. Her pelt is riddled with stars, and her paws and muzzle are white, She has a puffy tail, and long well groomed fur. She has long whiskers and small ears. Her eyes are always filled with happiness and love. Personality Goldheart lives up to her name. She is kind and loving, and never gives up on anyone. She loves to help kits cope with dying, and is basically a big mom. She loves sit around and soak up sun, and is a generally friendly cat. It makes her sad to see young kits in StarClan, but even sadder to see them in the Dark Forest. She enjoys leading younger cats around StarCaln, because it reminds her of her time as a mentor. History Goldheart was born and raised in IvyClan, and loved it with all her heart. She was an amazing warrior and mentor, but she died when she protected some kits from a wild fox. She misses IvyClan still, but is happy in StarClan. She enjoys greeting all newcomers, even though it breaks her heart seeing kits and young apprentices. Other Nothing, Might change as I go on.

[mewmehh]

She looks alright, but her personality is a little short. Would you mind giving a little more depth to her character before I add her?

[kitsune13]

Does that look good?