Eveningstream - Rootclan

[antsy]

Eveningstream Female 26 moons Heterosexual Rootclan Warrior "That's just life for you!" Appearance Eveningstream stands on the smaller scale of heights, her weight not being of extreme signifance, either. What her tiny stature cannot reflect, her wonderful blue-gray coat can. Not a day goes by that it is not well-kept. She takes great diligence in augmenting the gentle flow of her short fur and her green gaze seems to resemble a forest-colored moon amid the velvty brook. Personality A kind and gentle she-cat, Eveningstream does her best to give council to her clan-mates and never resits the urge to embark on a hunting party or border patrol. Her steadfast bravery lends a helping hand to her good nature. Often, this bravery as well as her open compassion can lead to her downfall. The inner strength that pushes her on might be brashly over-exerted and her penchant to do right by others may certainly be taken advantage of. History As soon as Eveningstream (then Evening that Settles on the Stream) could walk, she wanted to prove her worth to her tribe. She'd participate in den clean-ups, would try to bring order to whatever game her younger den-mates were mewling over and would even try to haul fresh-kill back to the nursery for any hungry queens. None of this behavior changed when she became an apprentice, nor did it let up when her name received a drastic shift in tune with the conversion of the Tribe of Ancient Roots into Rootclan. Other - future plans will be put here!

[pants]

Hi! Everything looks good so far! The only thing I'll need to ask you to change is the age, as we currently have a ban on creating characters under 25 moons at the moment, unless they are from a litter of two existing cats.

If you have questions about our bans and encouragements, please check out this thread! -> Character Creation Rules & Info

Or feel free to PM me! We also have a Discord server with a very supportive community where your questions would get answered right away.

Happy RPing! ^^

[antsy]

Thank you very much! I fixed it up and I really appreciate the help!

[Broadwaykat]

Hello Antsy -

Just one other thing, I'm not sure pant's realized; in the history of Rootclan, they have only been a true clan for a few moons now: before this they were a tribe: This occurred around February/March of this year, which means that any cats over the age of 16-18 would have been tribe cats to start with if they had been there from the start.

If this could be reflected in her history, that would be wonderful - if you need help with tribe names, you can ask - or if you wished she could have come from another clan or been a loner and simply migrated into the clan when they were forming as they were.

[antsy]

Thank you, Broadwaykat! I just tweaked it and I hope my revisions work. If not, I'd be glad to make some changes.