Swiftkit - ivyclan

[swiftstorm]

Name: swiftkit
Gender: She cat (female)
Age: almost 1 moon
Sexuality: Straight
Clan: Ivyclan
Rank: kit
Appearance: Swiftkit is a white cat with a few silver markings on her paws and ear tips. She has bright blue eyes and long legs making her very fast.

Personality: Swiftkit is a very kind cat, but she is also very stubborn and can be rude to cats she doesn't know. She is very determined and likes to learn new things.

History: swiftkits parents were two unknown cats, one from ivyclan and one from mothclan. They decided to raise her in ivyclan, but her parents were strangely killed not long after she opened her eyes. She has another sibling that is unknown in mothclan but doesn't know it.

Other: swiftkit loves the moonlight and her favorite food is rabbit.

[Broadwaykat]

Hey swiftstorm,

Just a heads up hun, we do require there be a little more information in all of the sections - her history is okay, considering that she is only a kit - but for personality and appearance is it best if we have at least 50 words in each section; you're close, but not quite there yet. Why not talk about the length of her fur, nose or paw pads - the length of her whiskers, and even how she feels, or even if she recognizes that she doesn't have her true parents anymore? Just a little more information in each spot would be wonderful - as I'm assuming the picture as your avatar is what you'd be using for her, correct?