Post by Rai on Feb 16, 2019 0:10:41 GMT
So my tom Creeksong in IvyClan has a sister, same age as he is at 55 Moons named Swiftwing (she's been backwritten as a red tabby 50% or more white, but she can be fully white as long as she masks red tabby.)
Creekpaw, Foxpaw and Swiftpaw had fairly neglectful parents that didn't show much interest in them once they were apprentices so they were left to their own devices and raised by their mentors practically.
But Creekpaw took their parents disinterest personally so he was desperate to keep his sister's close, as a result he tended to meddle with their friendships and be an all around bossy and atagonistic fellow; which they eventually began to have issues with obviously. So the two decided to just ignore him and go about their business after telling him off.
Desperate to make amends Creekpaw followed Foxpaw when she went out on her assessment, having been told to track some old fox tracks to the den they use to be in, but Creekpaw's interruption caused her to not realize there were new foxes in the den.
As a result both apprentices were viciously attacked and Foxpaw eventually died of her injuries after they were brought back to camp by the warriors who arrived at the sounds of their shouting and the foxes snarling.
Swiftpaw blamed Creekpaw for the incident, and he blamed himself as well. Left in the medicine cat den he became a warrior much slower than others his age range including Swiftpaw who became Swiftwing.
Swiftwing resents him, fully blames him and he's accepted the blame since it was his fault but he's not changed enough for her to forgive him. So the two don't talk at all and he'd love to reconcile with her but doesn't know how to go about it.
So that's basically it! You're welcome to make up your own other facts (how her apprenticeship went, her feelings on things, her mentor, if she had an apprentice or any mate, kits she mate have etc...)
Just post interest below :0 Maybe a mini-personality blurb and appearance you'd like to use? If it helps their parents were a solid black she-cat with green eyes and a red tabby and white tom with orange/gold eyes.
I'm keeping Foxpaw as my StarClanner (just working on her ref still!)
Creekpaw, Foxpaw and Swiftpaw had fairly neglectful parents that didn't show much interest in them once they were apprentices so they were left to their own devices and raised by their mentors practically.
But Creekpaw took their parents disinterest personally so he was desperate to keep his sister's close, as a result he tended to meddle with their friendships and be an all around bossy and atagonistic fellow; which they eventually began to have issues with obviously. So the two decided to just ignore him and go about their business after telling him off.
Desperate to make amends Creekpaw followed Foxpaw when she went out on her assessment, having been told to track some old fox tracks to the den they use to be in, but Creekpaw's interruption caused her to not realize there were new foxes in the den.
As a result both apprentices were viciously attacked and Foxpaw eventually died of her injuries after they were brought back to camp by the warriors who arrived at the sounds of their shouting and the foxes snarling.
Swiftpaw blamed Creekpaw for the incident, and he blamed himself as well. Left in the medicine cat den he became a warrior much slower than others his age range including Swiftpaw who became Swiftwing.
Swiftwing resents him, fully blames him and he's accepted the blame since it was his fault but he's not changed enough for her to forgive him. So the two don't talk at all and he'd love to reconcile with her but doesn't know how to go about it.
So that's basically it! You're welcome to make up your own other facts (how her apprenticeship went, her feelings on things, her mentor, if she had an apprentice or any mate, kits she mate have etc...)
Just post interest below :0 Maybe a mini-personality blurb and appearance you'd like to use? If it helps their parents were a solid black she-cat with green eyes and a red tabby and white tom with orange/gold eyes.
I'm keeping Foxpaw as my StarClanner (just working on her ref still!)