Sparrowkit

[gingersnapsdacat]

S Sparrowkit  Female 6 ? Ivyclan Apprentice Quote/Saying Genotype (optional) Appearance Sparrowkit is an average size kitten, who will grow up to be just a little bit larger than her mother, Heronflight. Also like her mother, she will grow up to have beautiful green eyes. She is the only long haired kit in her litter, which she inherited from her father. While a majority of her head it brown, as well as her back and sides, her ears, belly, chest, and all but one of her legs are completely white. Her right foreleg, however, has brown stripes that wrap around her wrist and upper arm. Her tail, which is also very fluffy, is white with brown streaks crisscrossing it.  Personality Sparrowkit is a nerd. There is not a singe plant, rock, or creature that she will not examine in close detail, hoping to find out even the smallest of details. She lacks her mother's thirst for adventure, only because she is more interested in figuring out the things around her to bother wondering what could lie out of her reach.  Unfortunately, spending all of your time staring at rocks and plants does not exactly turn you into much of the social butterfly. The only cat who she has always bonded with is her father, Wildstep.  History She Was the youngest daughter born to Heronflight and Wildsteps first, and currently only, litter. She has one elder sister, Dawnkit, and a brother named Pheasantkit.  Currently unknown to her, she has an entire extended family in MistClan.  Family and friends Mother: HeronStar Father: Wildstep Sister(s) Dawnpaw Brother(s): Pheasantpaw,  Mentor: Sustypetal Other rare pelt bought Genes- LL bB aa ii C Wsw

[LupTacco]

Sparrowkit looks great to go otherwise, but do you have Rare Pelt or some kind of trait/mutation from the breeding? Her white markings would require either of those.

[gingersnapsdacat]

She does not have any rare pelt stuff,
She is over 50% white, and the stripes on her legs are mostly just an artsy show of some splotching/striping, so what is the issue with her?
I can ask mama to fix stuff if you want

[LupTacco]

Her right foreleg, however, is a mixture of brown and white, with little stripes around her wrist and upper arm. Her tail, which is also very fluffy, is brown and white striped. 

White stripes cannot happen naturally; while the leg markings could be excused as white spots that are arranged weird, we would prefer if they were also described as such. Disconnected white rings/stripes down the tail would also be irregular. 

[gingersnapsdacat]

I have changed the description slightly to accommodate both things

[KingHarry]

Ginger, the description is fine. The issue is the image. White spotting like that requires rare pelt. Could you please either buy it (I know for a fact that you can afford it), or change the design? I recommend looking at real-life examples of what markings on cats to see what would be accepted without rare pelt.