Leopardkit ot Ivyclan

[Mama]

Leopardfang Female 14 moons Bisexual Ivyclan Warrior 37.5% Asian Leopard hybrid Appearance Two words to describe Leopardfang are unfairly beautiful. She is 37.5% Asian Leopard Cat, and this comes from her first father, Goldeneyes. However, that isn't where the coloring stops. The feline has a beautiful dappled pelt, of oranges and black, with white trailing from her neck Tufts, her underbelly, and to her tail. She has long, silky fur and large ears. Along with this, she's rather large due to being a lower hybrid. Her paws are giant and though she looks dainty with her spectacular pelt, she has a deadly array of muscles. Her eyes are predator-like and shine a bright golden, with black amplifying the look. Finally, she has a large slice down her face where the brown meets the ginger, making an odd but beautiful effect. Personality Leopardfang is a energetic warrior with a fearless attitude and occasionally, a bit of a bully. She grew up as a lone kit and with no mother to constantly give her attention, she strived for as much attention that she could get. Often, she got in trouble for picking on other kits, and when she got time with either of her fathers, it was a dream come true. One of the other cats that gave her the attention she desired was Twistedbranch, who was always there to listen to her ramble on how she should be the best leader, and to keep her safe from thunder. Now that she's older, she has more things to worry about then constant attention, but still has a fear of thunder and does enjoy praise. History Leopardkit was born to Goldeneyes and Maplespring, both of Ivyclan. She's a kit right now, so not a lot going on. She was born to a mother who was willing to uphold her father's kittens, however she was the only kitten. She loves her parents but is a bit over spoiled by the two. When they had to start working more with the clan, she drifted to another cat for attention: Twistedbranch. Her apprenticeship was smooth, and Owlstar had given her the same mentor that her father once had, and also her mate at the time.  She became a warrior on time, and her fathers recently had another surrogate litter, this time with much more kits then their first one. She loves them to death, and is thrilled to have little brothers and sisters that can look up to her.

[mewmehh]

I understand that because she's a kit, she doesn't have much history yet, but perhaps lengthen the History to 50 words; perhaps go into how she feels or interacts with her parents to help bulk up the word count ^^' Other than that, looks good.

[Mama]

Fixed!