Mountainkit-F-MOTHCLAN

[Ringtail]

Mountainkit Female 4 Moons Bisexual MOTHCLAN KIT Fuzzy Mountain? What? Appearance .A short haired chocolate colored tabby, covered completely with brown and white curly pelt. She has white socks, and a white and brown ringed tail. Her cheeks are fluffy, almost like a light snow covered mountain. Her belly and chest are completely white. Her nose and pawpads are a pink color. She has a small frame, just like her mother, but that doesn't stop her, using it to her advantage. She loves to climb, using her large paws to cling to trees and whatever she decides to cling to. The stripes near the white are a lighter brown. Image made the Kitten Maker which is made by Kamirah. Psst. Imagine the image is curly.  Personality This kit is really nasty. Playing pranks (and not in a joking way), biting at toes and ankles when given the chance, this little girl is spiteful and will show it well. Mean to most of her siblings, this little lady is ready to take on the world like that of blizzard..She likes to rumble and tumble and not to mention cause unholy chaos in the nursery, bullying other kits to show them she's the big boss herself. As she grew older, she became a bold young lady, ready to serve in any duties presented to her.  History Mountainkit was born to Lambcurl, Brighteyes and a mysterious tom! Born in the Mothclan, along with her siblings, 4 sisters, Fennelkit, Eggkit, Fluffkit, Powder/Cloudkit, and one brother, Honey/Sweetkit. (Included suggested names, since I don't know the other kits names).

[chickenbatnana]

Hey! Looking at the adoption thread, I can see this was the rolled appearance:

Shorthair chocolate tabby with up to 50% white and large ears.

In both the picture and the description, it appears you have made her a silver chocolate tabby instead of a regular chocolate tabby. The difference is in the white stripes, regular chocolate tabbies just have a lighter chocolate there. Also, the litter was rolled in Juli before the rule that made unadopted kittens die after some time, so she would be 4 moons old now. Please change this, and then she'll be ready to be accepted!

[Ringtail]

chickenbatnana

Would this be better?? 





imgur.com/gallery/SG4oUEw I couldn't get the image to pop up when I was making this post, and will be heading my way to work, so had to make it quick. 

[chickenbatnana]

Well, not really. The thing is the white behind the stripes. The stripes can be dark, but what is in between the stripes just can't be white, and has to be brown too.

[Ringtail]

I'm assuming your referring to the white belly, legs, and/or face?? Just curious so we can get this all cleared up, lol! xD

[chickenbatnana]

This white, like, the white at the stripes.

[Ringtail]

I'll have to use a different kitten maker to fix that, as it has very few markings to switch between.

[chickenbatnana]

That's okay, you could also add to the description that the white at the stripes should be a lighter brown. Descriptions basically overlap pics, but it would have to be clearly stated for clarity.

[Ringtail]

Added to the description on the stripes